From a2347ad75f91b80223e8b0c6d09bf077e7ff1cd7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Toby Date: Tue, 5 Sep 2023 21:29:36 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] fix(script): grammar --- scripts/install_server.sh | 50 +++++++++++++++++++-------------------- 1 file changed, 25 insertions(+), 25 deletions(-) diff --git a/scripts/install_server.sh b/scripts/install_server.sh index 64ba2b2..e66cbbb 100644 --- a/scripts/install_server.sh +++ b/scripts/install_server.sh @@ -178,7 +178,7 @@ show_argument_error_and_exit() { local _error_msg="$1" error "$_error_msg" - echo "Try \"$0 --help\" for the usage." >&2 + echo "Try \"$0 --help\" for usage." >&2 exit 22 } @@ -311,7 +311,7 @@ rerun_with_sudo() { _target_script="$0" fi - note "Re-running this script with sudo, you can also specify FORCE_NO_ROOT=1 to force this script running with current user." + note "Re-running this script with sudo. You can also specify FORCE_NO_ROOT=1 to force this script to run as the current user." exec_sudo "$_target_script" "${SCRIPT_ARGS[@]}" } @@ -320,15 +320,15 @@ check_permission() { return fi - note "The user currently executing this script is not root." + note "The user running this script is not root." case "$FORCE_NO_ROOT" in '1') - warning "FORCE_NO_ROOT=1 is specified, we will process without root and you may encounter the insufficient privilege error." + warning "FORCE_NO_ROOT=1 detected, we will proceed without root, but you may get insufficient privileges errors." ;; *) if ! rerun_with_sudo; then - error "Please run this script with root or specify FORCE_NO_ROOT=1 to force this script running with current user." + error "Please run this script with root or specify FORCE_NO_ROOT=1 to force this script to run as the current user." exit 13 fi ;; @@ -337,7 +337,7 @@ check_permission() { check_environment_operating_system() { if [[ -n "$OPERATING_SYSTEM" ]]; then - warning "OPERATING_SYSTEM=$OPERATING_SYSTEM is specified, opreating system detection will not be perform." + warning "OPERATING_SYSTEM=$OPERATING_SYSTEM detected, operating system detection will not be performed." return fi @@ -347,13 +347,13 @@ check_environment_operating_system() { fi error "This script only supports Linux." - note "Specify OPERATING_SYSTEM=[linux|darwin|freebsd|windows] to bypass this check and force this script running on this $(uname)." + note "Specify OPERATING_SYSTEM=[linux|darwin|freebsd|windows] to bypass this check and force this script to run on this $(uname)." exit 95 } check_environment_architecture() { if [[ -n "$ARCHITECTURE" ]]; then - warning "ARCHITECTURE=$ARCHITECTURE is specified, architecture detection will not be performed." + warning "ARCHITECTURE=$ARCHITECTURE detected, architecture detection will not be performed." return fi @@ -378,7 +378,7 @@ check_environment_architecture() { ;; *) error "The architecture '$(uname -a)' is not supported." - note "Specify ARCHITECTURE= to bypass this check and force this script running on this $(uname -m)." + note "Specify ARCHITECTURE= to bypass this check and force this script to run on this $(uname -m)." exit 8 ;; esac @@ -391,15 +391,15 @@ check_environment_systemd() { case "$FORCE_NO_SYSTEMD" in '1') - warning "FORCE_NO_SYSTEMD=1 is specified, we will process as normal even if systemd is not detected by us." + warning "FORCE_NO_SYSTEMD=1, we will proceed as normal even if systemd is not detected." ;; '2') - warning "FORCE_NO_SYSTEMD=2 is specified, we will process but all systemd related command will not be executed." + warning "FORCE_NO_SYSTEMD=2, we will proceed but skip all systemd related commands." ;; *) error "This script only supports Linux distributions with systemd." - note "Specify FORCE_NO_SYSTEMD=1 to disable this check and force this script running as systemd is detected." - note "Specify FORCE_NO_SYSTEMD=2 to disable this check along with all systemd related commands." + note "Specify FORCE_NO_SYSTEMD=1 to disable this check and force this script to run as if systemd exists." + note "Specify FORCE_NO_SYSTEMD=2 to disable this check and skip all systemd related commands." ;; esac } @@ -596,7 +596,7 @@ parse_arguments() { case "$1" in '--remove') if [[ -n "$OPERATION" && "$OPERATION" != 'remove' ]]; then - show_argument_error_and_exit "Option '--remove' is conflicted with other options." + show_argument_error_and_exit "Option '--remove' is in conflict with other options." fi OPERATION='remove' ;; @@ -607,12 +607,12 @@ parse_arguments() { fi shift if ! has_prefix "$VERSION" 'v'; then - show_argument_error_and_exit "Version numbers should begin with 'v' (such like 'v2.0.0'), got '$VERSION'" + show_argument_error_and_exit "Version numbers should begin with 'v' (such as 'v2.0.0'), got '$VERSION'" fi ;; '-c' | '--check') if [[ -n "$OPERATION" && "$OPERATION" != 'check' ]]; then - show_argument_error_and_exit "Option '-c' or '--check' is conflicted with other option." + show_argument_error_and_exit "Option '-c' or '--check' is in conflict with other options." fi OPERATION='check_update' ;; @@ -644,15 +644,15 @@ parse_arguments() { case "$OPERATION" in 'install') if [[ -n "$VERSION" && -n "$LOCAL_FILE" ]]; then - show_argument_error_and_exit '--version and --local cannot be specified together.' + show_argument_error_and_exit '--version and --local cannot be used together.' fi ;; *) if [[ -n "$VERSION" ]]; then - show_argument_error_and_exit "--version is only avaiable when install." + show_argument_error_and_exit "--version is only valid for install operation." fi if [[ -n "$LOCAL_FILE" ]]; then - show_argument_error_and_exit "--local is only avaiable when install." + show_argument_error_and_exit "--local is only valid for install operation." fi ;; esac @@ -803,7 +803,7 @@ get_latest_version() { local _tmpfile=$(mktemp) if ! curl -sS -H 'Accept: application/vnd.github.v3+json' "$API_BASE_URL/releases/latest" -o "$_tmpfile"; then - error "Failed to get latest release, please check your network." + error "Failed to get the latest version from GitHub API, please check your network and try again." exit 11 fi @@ -825,7 +825,7 @@ download_hysteria() { local _download_url="$REPO_URL/releases/download/app/$_version/hysteria-$OPERATING_SYSTEM-$ARCHITECTURE" echo "Downloading hysteria binary: $_download_url ..." if ! curl -R -H 'Cache-Control: no-cache' "$_download_url" -o "$_destination"; then - error "Download failed! Please check your network and try again." + error "Download failed, please check your network and try again." return 11 fi return 0 @@ -951,18 +951,18 @@ perform_install() { if [[ "x$FORCE" == "x1" ]]; then if [[ -z "$_is_update_required" ]]; then - note "Option '--force' is specified, re-install even if installed version is the latest." + note "Option '--force' detected, re-install even if installed version is the latest." fi _is_update_required=1 fi if [[ -z "$_is_update_required" ]]; then - echo "$(tgreen)Installed version is up-to-dated, there is nothing to do.$(treset)" + echo "$(tgreen)Installed version is up-to-date, there is nothing to do.$(treset)" return fi if is_hysteria1_version "$VERSION"; then - error "This script can be only used to install the Hysteria 2" + error "This script can only install Hysteria 2." exit 95 fi @@ -1040,7 +1040,7 @@ perform_check_update() { echo else echo - echo "$(tgreen)Installed version is up-to-dated.$(treset)" + echo "$(tgreen)Installed version is up-to-date.$(treset)" echo fi }